FrontCoverImprovement

This is the front cover after the imrovements. I changed the tone of the picture to make it look darker and i feel this has improved the sharpness of the image and makes it look more profesional. Also as i was told in my feedback that it looked quite basice i have added a bar to bar to the top and bottom of the page to add more info of what is in the magazine but it also makes it look more realistic and conventional. I got the ideas from the bars from other magazines which were similar to my genre.